1. Please read on to the end of the chapter.

2. Background: Read III, which takes you to the end of the chapter.

3. Compare the beginning of the chapter to the end of the chapter. What do we see happening?

4. Made a major change to the end of the chapter, one I think works much better than what I had before.

5. It would do you good to read the whole of it, starting with verse 5 and going on to the end of the chapter.

6. The last thing I want to point out, in this passage from here to the end of the chapter, is the way that Haze's senses are described.

1. Please read on to the end of the chapter.